Tuesday, February 3, 2015

A narrative Essay by: Malyn


A Night to Remember
(Narrative Essay)


When I first saw you, it feels like heaven. It was spectacular and all my sensation has just erupted. I have seen the most precious gem in my whole life. Even all the stars above couldn’t make me much happier inside. It was you whom I saw that night; the perfect replica of my imperishable love towards the person who created you. It was like a dream come true.

I have loved you despite all of my shortcomings. And I thank God for giving you to me even with all my imperfections. I could still remember that night when I feel the pain inside. The static pain that grows stronger as time goes by. I have come to realize that you wanted to go out from the shell I have kept you. So, you continuously move and it ache me inside. I’ve wanted to oust you tremendously but, the attending Ob-Gyne strongly disagrees. I have to hold my breath and seized the pain. And then, after 20 hours of excessive pain, I have to conceive you no matter what it takes.

You were like corps body with my own blood flowing in your veins. And it was like, fear strikes me but with undeniable hope. I have faith in you, that you are the best gift I have been waiting. While your doctor told me your descriptive asset; you were fair complexion contradictory to mine. It made me so happy seeing you healthy; with the total torso and the complete structure of a baby. And now begins the journey of my never-ending responsibility. That one night, I saw you was the best night of my life and worthy to remember.


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